My changes are slight, however, they are very carefully considered based off of our discussions we have in class. I looked the pictures hard and tried to find the lines and the motions in the pictures.. where the picture takes your eye. From there it was decided where and how to place the text.
I agree with the feet dangling in the air, bothers me a bit too. As did someone else poster in class, the first time when we were given a picture. They made the pictures smaller and then it was just cut off and kind of there. I think this may have been different because it was more boxed off? I thought it would be okay for dangeling feet then. Trust me, it bothers me too.
As for the treatment on my pictures, I see the treatment to the photographs as it illustrating a painting which adds to the idea of an artistic dance performance. I do not see it as modern and a light show. Regardless, i chose to change that picture and I took advantage of the lines the picture provides for me.
I took away all the boxed in text because the box made an easy way for me to separate the text and it also drew the eye in to the wrong spot.
I changed some of the leading on them and other small things.
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